This doesn't look like a magazine contents page, use of columns would make it look way better at the moment it looks like a jumble sale. The pictures used are stretched and look like they have been taken from a poor resolution camera. Layout should follow a conventional cover which you have analysed and should stop trying to experiment with such necessary features of a contents page. Overall the context such as the writing is good and the display of page number, still using the three colour scheme from your front cover.
This doesn't look like a magazine contents page, use of columns would make it look way better at the moment it looks like a jumble sale. The pictures used are stretched and look like they have been taken from a poor resolution camera. Layout should follow a conventional cover which you have analysed and should stop trying to experiment with such necessary features of a contents page. Overall the context such as the writing is good and the display of page number, still using the three colour scheme from your front cover.
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